So.. I finished it a lot earlier than I expected!
AND, I was hoping I could get everyone’s input about how I’ve translated the three chapters so far. Like is the style of writing easy to read? Or should I make the unique names of people, place and things a bit different? Anything at all would be appreciated so that I can improve myself.
Please enjoy! Ryuugoroshi Ch9
P.S. Holy crap, I just proofed it one more time just in case (It’ll be my 3rd time). Sorry for all the technical errors I overlooked! I think at least 99% of them should be gone now.